Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?
It is believed that keeping your household and job site clean helps to organize things. I agree with the statement as cleanliness is necessary for health and safety reasons as well as time-saving looking for lost properties.
House cleaning is an important task to keep it look nice and for safety reasons. Bacterial and germs are easy to spread, so it is strongly recommended to clean all the surfaces and floor at least a couple of times during the week. Especially if you have small children in the house who are crawling and touching everything. They could pick up different bacterial from the untidy room that can result in sickness. Also, small pieces on the floor could be hazardous. For example, my friend slipped on the floor because of a toy and twist the leg so badly that even a year after she could not walk properly.
Workplaces need to be clean to avoid accidents and save time looking for tools. Most people have felt this feeling that they could not find things because it is so messy. To avoid this situation, every employee should help to organize tools and find a proper place for everything. In addition, a messy workplace can cause accidents. For example, I am working at childcare and keeping clean is important as small children could slip or trip over. Also, teachers and parents might not see hazard and fall, therefore, we always pay attention to the floor to pick up toys.
In conclusion, organizing workplace avoids accidents and losing tools. Keeping home tidy is a priority to prevent any hazards and bacterial spreading which can cause sickness. In my opinion, tidy environments are visually nice and it is a pleasure to work when everything is clean.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'looks'?
Suggestion: looks
...leaning is an important task to keep it look nice and for safety reasons. Bacterial ...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended cleaning'.
Suggestion: recommended cleaning
...s are easy to spread, so it is strongly recommended to clean all the surfaces and floor at least a c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81786941581 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58496917478 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5593100591 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4705882353 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121734921834 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375798984005 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372415276246 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783964277268 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03417191576 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.