Essay topic * Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Nowadays, one of the highest earning professional are sports stars. Every now and then we come across discussions and news articles which reflect that the profession of sports is one of the higher paid ones. Some assert with the same whereas some hold a dissenting opinion in regards to the same. The essay will deal with both the sides followed by the opinion.
On the one hand, people say that the sports stars are not worthy of generation so much money as there is no education involved and by mere playing they are not entitled to reap huge benefits in terms of money as they did not study as much as other professionals did to reach a certain height and these people merely by playing should not be made to reach cloud nine. Sportspersons with no hard work or devotion are made so much famous and it is an insult to the other professionals. For example, the doctors, armed forces and parliamentarians who work tirelessly for the welfare of the people are not given so much recognition which they all are worthy of. Therefore, the sports celebrities do not deserve so much recognition when there are a lot of other worthy professionals.
On the other hand, some feel that sportspersons are worthy of all the fame and stardom that they receive as a result of their dedication. However, one must acknowledge the sincere dedication and hard work a sports star puts in during the budding years. The time when the person puts in immense hard work nobody seems to notice that from the very tender age sports stars are working hard by honing up their skills tirelessly. For instance, the sports personality starts with the hard work at the young age as they need to train themselves in one style of living and it just cannot happen overnight. Thus, nobody is entitled to be a judge of someone else’s life from a different.
In conclusion, in my opinion, human beings, in general, have a habit of poking their nose in someone else’s affairs. It should not be their prerogative or judge the other person on one scale. Nobody in this world is willing to pay someone who is not worthy enough and if the sports stars are being paid a hefty sum for their services, the same is because of their rapport in the society that they have gathered by consistently being on television.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: Now and then
... earning professional are sports stars. Every now and then we come across discussions and news art...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... whereas some hold a dissenting opinion in regards to the same. The essay will deal with both...
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Line 9, column 444, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ir skills tirelessly. For instance, the sports personality starts with the hard work a...
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Line 9, column 671, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
... judge of someone else's life from a different. In conclusion, in my opinion, human...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 443.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73589164786 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62635018283 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492099322799 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5375985014 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.421052632 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3157894737 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15789473684 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329855755454 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114152961417 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152808007205 0.0667982634062 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253049797324 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.326332033637 0.056905535591 573% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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