It is undeniable fact that many individuals spend their leisure time watching television. It is often argued that watching too much television can lead to laziness and problems in preventing socializing with people. And, I firmly concur with this notion.
Apparently, spending long hours watching television in regards to free time holds a wide range of destructive effects. First and foremost, TV programs are addictive, and these are myriad types of shows and programs being aired on television for various age groups. They are addictive like any bad habit that watchers get interests in the story of those programs and leaves in anticipating of next episode. To illustrate, if a person has a habit of sitting in front of the TV, he or she might go out if someone like a friend forces to get socialize in society or addicted television viewers do not incline social lives in their lives. Evidently, people might have comprise their social life by watching too much television in their life.
Moreover, the absence of outdoor activities like playing sports, visiting a restaurant, or seeing a friend has been observed in the daily schedule of the people's lives who sit and watch television in their free time. Due to this dilly dally habit, such kind of individuals is suffering from heart-related problems and obesity problems. Finally, TV has affected the vision of viewers because of spending more time on a television screen.
In conclusion, although watching television is an entertainment activity, spending long hours on the screen watching TV shows, programs will lead to severe effects like eye-vision problems, heart, and stomach-related problems. Therefore, everyone needs to watch TV for a limited period of leisure time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...spending long hours watching television in regards to free time holds a wide range of destruc...
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Line 3, column 532, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
... go out if someone like a friend forces to get socialize in society or addicted televi...
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Line 3, column 664, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'comprised'.
Suggestion: comprised
...eir lives. Evidently, people might have comprise their social life by watching too much ...
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Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... problems and obesity problems. Finally, TV has affected the vision of viewers be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, finally, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21352313167 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86248886982 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597864768683 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4220150915 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.692307692 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178831875929 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663978769755 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531759055668 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116489203161 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586846641627 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.