Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is no gainsaying that modern technology has changed our way of life drastically.These days different mass communication mediums such as television consumes so much of our spare time that we completely overlook to spend time with friends and family and become isolated. I totally agree to the phenomenon that nowadays people spend a good amount of time in front of tv screens, as a result, their social activities are limited and they tend to show laid back attitude in practical life too. I shall explain my stance with valid reasons and examples in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays media is so wide-spread that variety of programs are available to watch. In this fast paced era where people barely get free time, media has so much to offer and to grab attention. For instance, a normal salaried class person works 9;00 am – 5;00 pm job; when he returns back home, he prefers to watch his favorite shows on tv rather spending time with his social community. this habit consequently makes them lonely and separated from society.
Furthermore, another important aspect is health issues. this dilemma have certain detrimental affects on our health as well. sitting in the same posture for long hours is quite dangerous and it makes people lethargic and lazy. Considering health a priority is of paramount importance; particularly for people working in closed environment where they get very less time to walk and do physical activities. sitting in front of television for good long time can severely impact our physical and mental health.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, I opine that despite of innumerable benefits of television, its disadvantages still outweighs. Everything should be utilized with modesty. Due consideration should be given to important elements in life such as health and interaction with people & widening social circle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, still, well, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29702970297 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9142119254 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643564356436 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6248029903 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192388386682 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564367132584 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373957751853 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101277952133 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277959289689 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.