There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music?
Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Arts play an important role when it comes to cultural identity. Music is an effective element for relaxation, and it may help to solve some health issues. Whilst some people believe that Folklore is more important than foreign music, others have a diverse view. I believe that local music is important rather than an international one. This essay will first look at the need for music in people's lives, and then will discuss the importance of traditional music for the nation’s identity before concluding.
To begin with, Arts such as Music can play an indispensable role for human beings and non-human. In other words, Music has an effective role when it comes to treatments and medical aspects, Not only does it help males and females to feel calm, but also doctors use it to assist patients to face some illness. For example, if I feel stressed after a busy day work, I will listen to songs which aid me to release pressure and give me inside peace. Moreover, some farmers are using some kinds of music at their livestock to make animals more relax which help animals to produce milk more than before. For instance, in 2017, an article has been published by the Economist showed that some cows produce milk more when it listing to music. Hence, music has a significant impact on people's life.
In addition to that, people should listen to traditional music; it is an integral part of customs and traditions. As an illustration, the widespread of foreign music at any nations will slowly kill its values and replace it by different one; some people will suffer from culture conflict. Egypt is an example of a country which suffers from culture conflict because of the spreading of American songs. Thus, having given this example authorities should impose laws to limit the spread of foreign songs to tackle this issue.
It can be concluded that music is important for people in many life's aspects; I would like to restate my opinion that traditional music is more important for countries rather than an international one to save its national identity.
In addition to that, people should listen to traditional music; it is an integral part of customs and traditions. As an illustration, the widespread of foreign music at any nations will slowly kill its values and replace it by different one; some people will suffer from culture conflict. Egypt is an example of a country which suffers from culture conflict because of the spreading of American songs. Thus, having given this example authorities should impose laws to limit the spread of foreign songs in order to tackle this issue.
It can be concluded that music is important for people in many life's aspects; I would like to restate my opinion that traditional music is more important for countries rather than an international one in order to save its national identity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2365.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 482.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90663900415 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57511005277 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.406639004149 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 752.4 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1402567951 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.619047619 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9523809524 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2380952381 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277871061251 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111217567633 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823384846428 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200569710069 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764409992976 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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