Some people think that parents have the greater influence on their child's developed, while others think that a child's teacher has more influence.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that children are getting influenced by their surrounding and role models. Whist many people are of the belief that parents have the greatest influence on their children, others have a diverse view that their school teachers are the greatest influencers for them. I believe that both parents and teachers are responsible for leaving an impression on offspring’s minds. This essay will discuss and my opinion will be demonstrated before reaching a conclusion.
On one hand, it is more likely that children are influenced by their parents in thinking and acting; they spend most of their times at home. In other words, parents have the utmost power to control their children way of thinking and on creating their character and personality. This can be exemplified in different categories in communities as doctors’ or engineers’ sons and daughters are usually grow up to be doctors or engineers just like their parents. Hence, it is noticed that parents are more likely to influence their children’s future decisions without even a try.
On the other hand, class teachers are mostly role models to many students and learners. As an illustration, students usually consider their teachers as their mentors and they probably grow up wishing to be teachers to be able to influence others. This can be witnessed in a survey which has been published at an Egyptian newspaper named Gazat asking students about their future dream job, shows that 75% of primary school’ students said that they would like to be a future teacher just like their teachers.
It can be concluded that offspring are being influenced not only by their parents but they can also deeply influenced by their teacher. It is recommended that schools should held training campaigns so that teacher be aware with their role not only as teachers but also as influencers for the new generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, no doubt, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07741935484 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7385861897 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51935483871 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5404530327 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29713129535 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127854737095 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763822260368 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200897238037 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665871724384 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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