There is an increase in noise in our daily lives nowadays. Why is this a problem? What can be done to reduce it?
Today, people are encountering an increasing amount of noise on a daily basis. Several issues associated with this development have occurred. This essay will examine why the increase of annoying sounds brings detrimental impacts and propose solutions to improve noise pollution.
The first reason why loud noise is a big problem is that it distracts people from concentrating on their works and routine activities. As workers cannot fully focus on their tasks due to disturbance from noise, they will not be able to complete their jobs effectively. This, then, leads to low working productivity. For example, my accountant friend who is bearing the noise of subway trains every day can only finish his summarized calculation on the following workday. As for daily routines, loud noise makes people feel unpleasant in doing what they love.
Another reason is that noise can detrimentally affect people’s health. Medical research indicates that frequent exposure to loud and unstable sound can damage the entire hearing system in the long term. Danang, a developing city which produces a massive amount of noise due to the outbreak of industrial factories, has over 30 percent of its residents with hearing issues.
However, there are viable measures to tackle the current noise pollution. The authority can impose strict rules and penalties on industrial noises. The governmental regulations will force companies to establish a noise-reduction system to their production process, which means sounds from heavy machines will be vastly muzzled. In addition, car manufacturers can integrate new technology to their engine making them quieter when operating.
In conclusion, the increase of unpleasant sound nowadays is a big problem for everyone. Nevertheless, some actions from the government and enterprises when taken into account can ease up noise pollution.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, nevertheless, so, then, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53658536585 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92629827604 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648083623693 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2161943245 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4705882353 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255641583729 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773166685231 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476190015053 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137672851824 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556365351811 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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