These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation (migration from the country to the city) and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed.
While country towns were once vibrant and growing places, these days many appear to be as people move to the city in search of work and excitement. In this essay, I intend to discuss the impact of this problem as well as how more people could be encouraged to live in the rural areas.
Surprisingly, the most serious consequences of rural depopulation are often felt in urban areas. As a result of overcrowding, cities throughout the word today are increasing prone to environment problems like air, water and noise pollution. Beijing is a particularly good example of this. Further, the uncontrolled growth of cities also gives rise to social problems such as high unemployment, crime and in less affluent countries, the creation of slums. Clearly, there is a limit to how many people can live in one area before living standards are negatively influenced. In order to stem the tide of rural depopulation, I believe we must first address its root causes. At the heart of the matter is the disparity between services and facilities in the country and those in the city. I firmly believe that urban and rural dwellers alike would find the idea of country life far more appealing if high quality shopping centers, cinemas, swimming pools, restaurants, libraries, schools and hospitals were more readily available in the country. One further method of attracting people to the country would be for government to provide financial incentives to business and professional workers who willingly relocate to rural areas.
In reality, this problem is unlikely to be resolved in the short term. However, it is by no means insurmountable, and I am convinced that more people will choose the country life becomes less comfortable and more expensive.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275862068966 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.122257053292 0.155533422707 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0971786833856 0.0946595960268 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0658307210031 0.0501214627716 131% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0219435736677 0.0437548338989 50% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119122257053 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.025078369906 0.0403226058552 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86060329568 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0407523510972 0.0326793684256 125% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0877742946708 0.0861772015684 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0188087774295 0.021408717616 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00940438871473 0.011925033212 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1740.0 1933.35771543 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04166666667 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368055555556 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277777777778 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1875 0.203846283523 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121527777778 0.137316102897 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86060329568 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607638888889 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 67.1649647573 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1538461538 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4604461193 49.517814964 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.846153846 127.492653851 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38877755511 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 49.9316239316 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.69124875643 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.55629070891 0.332605444948 167% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0892957124055 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0583444328778 0.0668466124924 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522853924485 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167169662354 0.148594505496 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.236321566267 0.134430193775 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927905999034 0.0742795772207 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.436099601299 0.324371583561 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0878438528405 0.0638462369009 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.394715326927 0.228012699653 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127348099013 0.058150111329 219% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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