These days many families move to other countries for work Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move However others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children Discuss both these views and give your own o

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These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Undoubtedly, there is an escalating count of mass exodus to other nations in search of employment. Even though minority vocalizes that life of children become quite difficult, majority believes that it is advantageous for children in long run. While children have to face culture shock when they suddenly migrated to other places, I cogitate that this migration gets acquaint them with wonderful educational programs of developed countries.

Since children are quite immature and indecisive by nature, when they have to live in strange cultural they feel isolation. Seemingly, owing to migration, there are countless changes in eating habits, dressing senses, interpersonal skills and languages which sometimes become quite arduous for children to adapt. Consequently, this cultural exchange inculcates anxiety, depression and some other mental disorders in children. Also, it is biased to overlook the facts documented by Canadian Immigration Council that when parents migrate to Canada through Express Entry System, 90 percent young children develop complex mental disorders.

On the other side, people often relocate to eminent countries in search of greener pastures, and this exodus blesses their offspring to learn in one of the sophisticated educational systems. Rich nations invariably devote a lion share of their annual budgets to update their educational programs. As a result, migrated students can take benefits of profound study materials along with prolific teachers available in modern schools which eventually lays the foundation of luminous career. To exemplify, as per the report stated by the ‘New York Time’ that owing to availability of modern educational amenities in privilege countries, the success ration of migrated children increased.

In conclusion, although it is quite arduous for children to settle in a new aura, migration to developed worlds bestow them hi-tech education facilities. Therefore, I believe that migration is imperative for children as it helps them to study in advanced schools

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Average: 5 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71710526316 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86947711125 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621710526316 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2991770219 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.692307692 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189048838694 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717996637198 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552370763898 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122161299157 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426477951303 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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