These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
In the contemporary era, it has become a trend that mothers are the breadwinners of the family and the father stay at home for looking after their offspring. There are numerous reasons for this and in my perception; it is the best approach for modern society.
History suggests, the condition of the women was ridiculous in past decades and they were not even allowed to get an education. But, nowadays due to modernization and urbanization, the image of the women has improved alot. Women are giving competition to men in every aspect of life such as education and technology. The prominent reason why husband role has been changed in recent years is the acceptance of the society for them to become nannies instead of going to work and support the family. Moreover, presently, women are being recruited on many jobs due to their personalities to certain kinds of professions. For example, in the nursing, teaching and human resources management professions, the ratio of the women exceed men because of their more patience and caring nature than men.
Moving further, personally, I believe the change of husband and wife’s role has a major influence not only on the society but among the families as well. Having the role of househusband, men can realize the arduous job of his wife that makes him more respectable toward her. Additionally, it can make harmony between the spouses which positively effects on the children as well. Also, it is a great chance that allows the parents to decide who to earn money for the family and who to take care of.
In conclusion, the changing roles in the family have been profound impact as a whole and it should be treated as progress. It is the positive development towards gender equality.
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Suggestion: resources'; resource's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89189189189 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77052569686 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2025324827 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.428571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203132571987 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607126026369 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564155921856 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118392377051 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065910492666 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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