Today many children spent a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. why is it? mit is a positive or negative development?
The rise in technology is a cause for physical activities. At the moment, many offspring consume their leisure time by playing games on gadgets, rather than physical recreation. This essay will discuss the plausible reason behind this phenomenon at its impact as a result of the young generation.
At first, modern technology playing a crucial role in the development of a growing adolescent. Though, it broadens one’s horizon. However, in the current scenario the entertainment media is becoming increasingly popular among the young generation, they want to devote their time by playing games on computers, the reason behind this is they want to escape from their boring and monotonous live, although the feeling of success. Research shows that video games boost their energy level, for instance, high definition graphics, Dolby Sound, feel them that everything is happing in reality.
On the contrary, despite the nation’s fascination with the latest gadgets children’s getting isolated from their own family members. Young generation started growing in their own world of imagination rather than the real world, although there are a plethora of factors surrounding among this issue the foremost is the health issue due to spending hours at home while playing games, toddler’s leads towards health problem such as obesity, stress, unsocialised, homesickness. In the west, an average child does have sports twice a week that is not enough for a sedimentary lifestyle.
To gist, I would like to say that technology is playing a massive role in one’s life but in my standpoint, it had a negative impact on the young generation by keeping them away from their natural talent.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for instance, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40671641791 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91874057742 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.8793587744 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.727272727 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113017869536 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418048424028 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519426327141 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692438516729 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330531162206 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.