In my opinion, students travelling to foreign countries for higher studies can be seen as a positive move. There are many advantages to such an outflux towards foreign land.
Firstly, the main advantage that students get by enrolling in foreign educational institutions is that they get to learn the newest of technology or subjects of their area of interest. This is due to the fact that the curriculum of foreign colleges is designed to learn the niche areas of subjects. Moreover, education is more practical and hands-on driven in alien institutions when compared to colleges in their home country which are more inclined towards theoretical knowledge.
Secondly, the foreign country gets an economic gain via admissions in these colleges. This economic gain is being utilized for further research and development in studies. This also helps in generating employment opportunities in the alien land.
Thirdly, the main advantage that the hosting country can get is in the form of priceless knowledge the students have gained by studying in their institutions. The graduated students could act as a resource pool for jobs for which local talent is not fully available. Thus, the knowledge attained locally can be used and shared for the socio-economic development of the country.
Conversely, the adverse affect of this influx of students also means that the hosting country has to support the well-being of these students till their education is completed. This means that countries resources like food, water, electricity will be consumed by them, till the time the students start contributing in the economic development of the country.
Lastly, the infusion of humans will always help in the overall building of an elastic world where knowledge will be the ultimate power.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33450704225 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85151923925 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5758465988 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.214285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185603944013 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652575290731 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464189011774 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869446275885 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038155032791 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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