Today, more and more students are deciding to move a different country for highier studies.Do you think
that the benefits of this outweigh the problems.
Foreign universities are preferred choice for the higher education, over the institutions in the home country. Certainly studying abroad pose a challenge to students, but over the course of time advantages outweigh the short-term disadvantages.
Firstly, one learns about new culture and religion in addition to acquiring world class education. This really improves thinking and imaginative capabilities of the mind since one gets to learn a new lifestyle. By interacting with local students, it amplifies their thought process to absorb new teachings quickly. They become mentally tough by living in foreign conditions. For example, an Indian student travels to France for MBA , not only gets to learn French culture but French language in its purest form. Furthermore, placement cells of these prestigious and world known universities support students in securing their future by placing them in the top companies of the world.
On the other hand, there are always risks associated in alien conditions. First, course fees will be expensive in case currency exchange price is fluctuating a lot. One has to pay more to pursue further.Sometimes homesickness might affect people since they will miss their families. This inadvertently affects their studies, and lastly their grades in the college. Additionally, one could get affected by the revision in visa norms during the course schedule, if country may plan to so. They may have to forfeit the course in the middle of the term.
To sum up, pursuing foreign education is a growing trend with a number of benefits but one should assess options from all the angles before making a decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...Indian student travels to France for MBA , not only gets to learn French culture b...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sometimes
.... One has to pay more to pursue further.Sometimes homesickness might affect people since ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, may, really, so, as to, for example, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31034482759 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91047990967 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.686379829 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977500464655 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261187056819 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261479361956 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483811094819 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147686828403 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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