Nowadays, most of the people love visiting to the places where the conditions are really tough and challenging such as Sahara desert and the Antarctic. Apparently tourists can enjoy the immense joy and thrilling experience when they are undertaking difficult journeys. Whereas, these journeys may push those travelers into deep trouble and sometimes it would be more dangerous than expected. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of such adventurous trips.
One of the biggest benefits of travelling to unfriendly locations is that the journey would give them the thrilling experience that is enjoyed by most of the tourists as well as touching the untouched areas and testing their limits and abilities may be giving the travellers more satisfaction and excitement than just visiting to the usual locations. The feeling of accomplishment or achievement is not easy to explained by mere words. These days, most of the tourists love safaris and some are really keen on wildlife safaris which seems to be really dangerous. yet tourists are ready to accept the risk. lots of people have been visiting to those safari parks. Especially African lion safari parks are really famous among adventure lovers.
Another main benefit is developing survival skills against tough conditions which are always challenging for humans. In other words, the passion on adventure journeys always drives the people towards the toughest locations and they have to experience lots of challenging situations which made them to learn new skills to survive under different circumstances. For an example, when people from tropical countries visits to Antarctic they would learn the skills which is required to survive in the arctic countries and vice versa.
Even though adventurous trips are thrilling, on the flip side, there are some downsides and the most important drawback is that these trips can be risky and highly dangerous. Things can go against their plans. Travellers may be in trouble if something went wrong. However, travellers are aware of those risks.yet they want to get some sort of thrilling experiences. Lots of traveller have died while trekking the big mountains and rafting in turbulent rivers and some have hurt themselves and injured during the adventurous expeditions
To conclude,There are people enjoy lots of benefits from difficult trips. Whereas, there is a negative side also waiting for them. Most of the adventurous trips are extremely dangerous and many incidents have been recorded all over the world regarding accidents and loss of lives due to adverse weather conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, however, if, may, really, regarding, so, well, whereas, while, as to, sort of, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37712895377 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76049691856 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540145985401 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.4550189599 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.55 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19429348077 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530454472915 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689679675294 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107243062303 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101827806981 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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