Nowadays, most of the people love visiting to the places where the conditions are really tough and challenging such as Sahara desert and the Antarctic. Apparently tourists can enjoy the immense joy and thrilling experience when they are undertaking difficult journeys. Whereas, these journeys may push those travelers into deep trouble and sometimes it would be more dangerous than expected. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of such adventurous trips.
One of the biggest benefits of travelling to unfriendly locations is that the journey would give them the thrilling experience that is enjoyed by most of the tourists as well as touching the untouched areas and testing their limits and abilities may be giving the travellers more satisfaction and excitement than just visiting to the usual locations. The feeling of accomplishment or achievement is not easy to explained by mere words. These days, most of the tourists love safaris and some are really keen on wildlife safaris which seems to be really dangerous. yet tourists are ready to accept the risk. lots of people have been visiting to those safari parks. Especially African lion safari parks are really famous among adventure lovers.
Another main benefit is developing survival skills against tough conditions which are always challenging for humans. In other words, the passion on adventure journeys always drives the people towards the toughest locations and they have to experience lots of challenging situations which made them to learn new skills to survive under different circumstances. For an example, when people from tropical countries visits to Antarctic they would learn the skills which is required to survive in the arctic countries and vice versa.
Even though adventurous trips are thrilling, on the flip side, there are some downsides and the most important drawback is that these trips can be risky and highly dangerous. Things can go against their plans. Travellers may be in trouble if something went wrong. However, travellers are aware of those risks.yet they want to get some sort of thrilling experiences. Lots of traveller have died while trekking the big mountains and rafting in turbulent rivers and some have hurt themselves and injured during the adventurous expeditions
To conclude,There are people enjoy lots of benefits from difficult trips. Whereas, there is a negative side also waiting for them. Most of the adventurous trips are extremely dangerous and many incidents have been recorded all over the world regarding accidents and loss of lives due to adverse weather conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, however, if, may, really, regarding, so, well, whereas, while, as to, sort of, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37712895377 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76049691856 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540145985401 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.4550189599 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.55 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0308109755379 0.236089414692 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00982886936081 0.076458572812 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0141323778982 0.0737576698707 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.017809756587 0.150856017488 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00635097929639 0.0645574589148 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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