Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the advantage and disadvantage of tourist who visits such places?
Nowadays an increasing number of tourists are showing their interests to visit the countries with adverse weather situations, in order to curb their hunger of exploration and adventure. The following essay will discuss the merits and demerits of such circumstances along with providing the opinion.
To start with, it benefits them to relieve their mind and body from the hectic and monotonous lifestyle. Therefore, these places are chosen to be visited to satisfy the adventurous mindset of the tourists. Moreover, it aids them to fight and control their fears which had settled deep down in their hearts since childhood and teenage years. A latest survey carried by the students of Oxford University stated that more than 60% candidates mentioned their interest in exploring such places.
In contrast, the incidents of death cannot be resisted while staying at such inhabitable places. In addition, the non-sustainable and adverse climate conditions or prolonged diseases apart from the lack of food and potable water. A recent study on BBC netwotk channel has illustrated that the chances of death of newcomers has risen significantly in last 10 years because of various ailments, hunger and thirst.
In a nutshell, it seems that more and more people are being interested in going to spots like Antactica or Sahara desert, but the consequences cannot be ignored during their stay. Whereas, there ought to be proper arrangement of shelter, food and drinking water, which in turn will prove beneficial for their lives. Nevertheless. It can be stated that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, nevertheless, therefore, whereas, while, apart from, in addition, in contrast, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38976377953 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83092494218 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649606299213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2855189971 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159194008741 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509836244542 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046760252788 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840949479703 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248923386719 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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