Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays, people lure to explore inhabitable places irrespective of the danger that it brings on. In other words, even though it has a life-threatening challenge, people like to visit a place where they can conquer their fear and imbibe with self-gratification. Nevertheless, this kind of expedition has both pros and cons included.
On the positive side, discovering a hostile place and posting over social media provides an adrenaline rush to the human being. There are mere words to express one's conquer feelings. People mostly like to go for high mountain area or river rafting to challenge themselves, for example. Moreover, this type of significant achievement brings confidence to overcome hindrance in our day to day life. From history, round the world, it has been proved that this kind of discovery keep motivated people like Columbus and we are the witness for such expeditions. Providing inner peace and stability is one of the biggest reason to explore places, where geographical conditions are unfavourable.
On the flip side, there are a plethora of disadvantages whilst enjoying vacations in dessert, mountain or extremely difficult places like Antartica: people die because of unfavourable weather, some of them become immobile for there entire life whereas others got missing sporadically, which cost the government to deploy a costly rescue mission. To get an adrenalin rush people not only destroy their own career but also play with the emotions of their friends and family, who might be depending on them.
To conclude, though there is a lot of risks included in life-threatening expeditions, people still find their way to enjoy their every moment with proud and conquers. Everyone has a single life and they want to leverage to bottom of the line.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 484, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... of their friends and family, who might be depending on them. To conclude, though there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, whereas, for example, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2701754386 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99636385776 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645614035088 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4528882833 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.538461538 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122393845251 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368841533726 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348940040674 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674753051608 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409923100288 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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