You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
say how your work could be done while you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Mr. Jones,
I am working in the position of Senior Tech Lead in your organization. I am writing to express my intention to work in the head office in Auckland, New Zealand, for the next six months.
Currently, I am doing a Project Management Professional course along with my job, and it is a compulsory requirement of class to attend a six-month training module which will be held in Auckland.
At present, I am occupied with two projects, and fortunately, one of the clients is from Auckland. Therefore, I will have a chance to meet them, and if the meeting goes well, I would be able to generate more business from them. The other project will be handled by my assistance in my absence. She has in-depth knowledge and complete grip on the overall project.
I would appreciate if you could kindly allow me to join the head office and make the necessary arrangements for a smooth transition. It will be an excellent opportunity for me to bring more business to the company. Moreover, I would be to hone my skills through the training, which will, in turn, beneficial for the company.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Manas Sahu
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82843137255 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83807866411 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.607068107 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0833333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213013782301 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737617177368 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685172891057 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112553321268 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906300024664 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.