In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
News is an indispensable part of our life which keep us updated on local as well as peripheral geographic regions, whereas Millenials do not convince to read a newspaper or follow news on TV. There are several reasons for it; however, it can be manipulated by tweaking the news representation; the way it is getting delivered to everyone.
The first and foremost fence is the lacking of interest to follow news in regular life. Youngsters, mainly Millenials, are mostly like to be self-oriented. They focus on their studies, internship, work, and activities or hobbies they crave most. A student who is going to his school or college from 10 AM to 5 PM, for example, with consecutive other coaching classes, hardly gets some time to look after the ongoing news. Moreover, reading a traditional newspaper seems a tedious regime to follow, whereas watching the news on TV provide meager entertainment than a sci-fi series.
On the other hand, nowadays newspaper publisher publishes the news which is commercially and financially appropriate for them. Though there is relevant news on current affairs, there is a lot of junk news pilled up in several pages. The front page of the newspaper, which is the face of a paper, for instance, always filled with a juggernaut industry. In a study, it has been found that 70% of news is irrelevant, whereas only 20% are useful for public awareness and the rest 10% are an advertisement. By virtue of which, besides young people other generation also moving away from conventional. Similarly, on TV, there are commercial breaks than actual news.
To make the news agreeable there are two significant steps can be taken: one is only publishing the truth and right full news in online and social media, next is representing the news in very concisely with a maximum 60 number of words. So that individuals do not need to spend ample amount of time to preceded by the story.
To conclude, According to me, to co-up with today's hustling and bustling market, everything should be convenient and easily accessible everywhere, for example, in mobile devices. Youngstars want to indulge with current public affairs; nevertheless, they need the right and easy way to access it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reading'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: reading
...ons, whereas Millenials do not convince to read a newspaper or follow news on TV. There...
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Line 13, column 238, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sely with a maximum 60 number of words. So that individuals do not need to spend ample ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01351351351 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8945542178 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610810810811 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5480367275 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.117647059 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159709008927 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494038086476 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460335548594 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892761261109 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050322639027 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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