Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy?
What other things in life can make people happy?
Some people believe that earning enormous money, which is the indispensable segment of life, is the key to be pleasant. Most of the individuals tend to be thrifty, whereas a few become spendthrift, which is again an individual choice of living their life. There are a plethora of reasons that keep a being blissful by having a tremendous amount of money; however, not the only reason to be cheerful.
Possessing a considerable amount of money crucial to accumulate and fulfill one's dream. In other words, one can achieve all the array of wish and desire, which every person would have thought to accomplish, and the only obstacle is the lack of sufficient wealth. Once the required wealth is gained and so as the crave, one can feel the real bliss of there life. A dream car, a dream house and a world tour with a lovely wife can be obtained, for example.
However, money is not the only key which will keep you merry in your entire life; that's where family and friends come to existence to make your earthly life to a heavenly kingdom. Moreover, cultural activities and family function unite people to have the charm of being enjoyed together. In studies, it has been seen that lonely fat cat tend to have less life span than people staying with family.
To sum up, money has always been an essential aspect of a person to being joyful and having a lovely family and friends will be a plus. Besides keeping the money as a primary goal, engaging with others will enlight different prospectives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...the required wealth is gained and so as the crave, one can feel the real bliss of there l...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ill keep you merry in your entire life; thats where family and friends come to existe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69696969697 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48017853855 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1757128828 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282355536899 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100567412599 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516111112759 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166916203436 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549588143156 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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