Today, more and more tourists are visiting are places where conditions are difficult, such as
Sahara or Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists in visiting such
places.
In the present age, an increasing number of people tour to secluded parts of the world where
the atmospheric conditions are not favorable. Such type of travel has its fair share of merits and
drawbacks for the tourists.
To begin with, a major advantage is people chance upon to witness the unexplored beauty of
those locations. Because, these places, namely Sahara or Antarctica, are devoid of any human
settlement considering it's climatic conditions. Therefore, tourists are fuelled to explore the
locations in order to attain a sense of adventure. Furthermore, people achieve the adrenaline
feeling and are thrilled while exploring deserted areas. This aspect usually is not gained in
visiting common tourist locations. For instance, Jeep Safari is a popular trip provided on the
deserts of Dubai and in adjacent gulf countries.
However, these dangerous tours possess a few disadvantages. Firstly, the atmosphere in
locations such as Antarctica are not entirely sustainable for humans. Despite, people taking
safety gears and equipment to protect themselves from any untoward, it is highly unlikely to
survive from cold storms and plummeting temperature. In addition, people must spend
exorbitant amount of money on these trips, given the risky conditions prevalent. For instance, a
recent survey states that over 2000 tourists had died in span of 5 years trapped in ice slides in
Antarctica.
In conclusion, people thronge to unusual locations by tour for expedition and to achieve
sensation. However, such tours might also be fatal to them, given the harsh weather in those
places of the world. People might need to research before planning to tour to potentially
threatful locations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is usually
...e exploring deserted areas. This aspect usually is not gained in visiting common tourist ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53759398496 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85068770198 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65037593985 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8308802599 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.0625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157576198316 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481172257304 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479235039479 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0410122381959 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455511118902 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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