Today more people are travelling than ever before.Why is this the case?What are the benefits of travelling to the traveller?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.

Essay topics:

Today more people are travelling than ever before.
Why is this the case?
What are the benefits of travelling to the traveller?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.

travelling is one of the most important matters in the present century. people are more enthusiastic to know about other places and cultural diversities. In this essay,I would like to mention some of the benefits of this topic from my reading and other experiences.

In the last 20 years,social media is influencing human lives in many ways.Similarly,in travelling too.people try to explore new places through internet and other media and do research about historical locations.Some may post pictures in facebook or instagarm and others get inspired through it.Anyway,internet has caused a large rise in tourism for most of the countries.

There are lots of advantages to individuals mostly they learn new languages,try new variety of food.Also,when we visit a different place,we try to understand their culture and traditions.It will be a good expereience other than watching sceneric beauty of the place.Some tourist locations offer medicinal treatments like massage.So people love to enjoy that too.

Personally,I love to travel mostly to beautiful hilly places.It give us a smooth,warm mind which will take away all our depressions and bad feelings.I strongly recommend that trip is the most useful medicine for many of our problems.I recently had a family trip to thailand.It was an amazing trip and we all enjoyed fully.we had a 7 day package and gone to paragliding,underwater diving and lot many.I never had such an experience before.

In summary,everyone must travel and explore new places within their budget.I cannot find any negatives regarding this matter.trip can be done alone or with suitable group of friends.One should be careful in choosing whom you are accompanying with.Bad company may ruin the entire tour.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, may, regarding, similarly, so, thus, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43173431734 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35414814409 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667896678967 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.159109428 49.4020404114 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 210.285714286 106.682146367 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.7142857143 20.7667163134 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122341543746 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636035299838 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230478104278 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689063417395 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401156741323 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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