Essay topics: Your brother couldn't join you on a trip that you guys planned. Write a letter to a friend inviting him to join.
.explain about the trip.
. explain why your brother couldn't make it.
. giving details about the trip.
Dear John,
How are you? hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter to invite you for a leisure trip with me to the famous water theme park near my place on the coming weekend. I will be happy if you can join with me.
I have got two free tickets from my company as yearend gift. Initially, my brother was planning to come. However, he got an urgent job which he needs to complete before next week. he may go to office during weekend also. I dont like to go alone for the trip. It'll be a pleasure if you are there with me.
we meet up at the city centre at 7.00 am. Then we will go to the park in a special bus. At 7.30 am, we'll have our breakfast at the restaurant near the entrance of the park. After that, we'll check in and go to various rides. there is an artificial river inside the park, we can go to boating.The most beautiful show is that of dolphins. we will get free lunch inside the park. At 4.00 pm, we'll return to city centre.
I hope you'll accept my invitation. Waiting to hear from you.
Regards,
Jane
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... he needs to complete before next week. he may go to office during weekend also. I...
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...eek. he may go to office during weekend also. I dont like to go alone for the trip. ...
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...may go to office during weekend also. I dont like to go alone for the trip. Itll be ...
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...be a pleasure if you are there with me. we meet up at the city centre at 7.00 am...
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... well check in and go to various rides. there is an artificial river inside the park,...
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...r inside the park, we can go to boating.The most beautiful show is that of dolphins...
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...ost beautiful show is that of dolphins. we will get free lunch inside the park. At...
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...m, well return to city centre. I hope youll accept my invitation. Waiting to hear f...
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...y invitation. Waiting to hear from you. Regards, Jane
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... Waiting to hear from you. Regards, Jane
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.12315270936 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08309740873 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645320197044 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.893078756 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 44.0526315789 76.5299724578 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.6842105263 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108080227746 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340133413832 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044738065844 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767668530678 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706951794992 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.3 8.37731958763 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.43 8.71597938144 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.0 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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