Essay topics: Your brother couldn't join you on a trip that you guys planned. Write a letter to a friend inviting him to join.
.explain about the trip.
. explain why your brother couldn't make it.
. giving details about the trip.
Dear James,
I am writing to invite you for seven days trip to goa in next month as my brother would not be able to make this due to his railway job.
Let me explain you my situation in detail. Though, this trip was planned 2 months ago with mutual understanding of me and my younger brother, however, yesterday he came to know that one inspection from railway ministry would be on triages in the same week. In addition, I had also paid non-refundable advance money to the Grand hotel in Goa, which is nearly half the amount of total booking. Overall, in fact, I am left with no choice in that scenario. This is why I asked you to join me as you are also like brother to me. Moreover, its have been a long time that I met you.
Would you join me on the trip? The flight tickets are booked on 13th november in evening. Therefore, you need to join me on 12th november on my place. Also, take some winter clothes as there would be chilly atmosphere.
I hope you will join me on this trip.
Regards,
Vinod Chauhan
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31088082902 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33658650606 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647668393782 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.088627472 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241964678993 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964455830386 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930042114526 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176252833294 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292854303735 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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