In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
In this fast-pacing world, the crime level is increasing substantially with the increase of technology. Many countries of the world are facing crime issues at mammoth level. Several factors can be attributes to this escalated violence level in crimes and crime rates. This essay will discuss the multifarious reasons which are responsible for this growing phenomena.
The first and the foremost reason for such illegal activities are movies and songs. In films, nowadays, the lifestyle of the enemies are so lavish and prosperous that everyone desires for such life. People specially youngsters are so much impacted with them that they also try to follow such path. For instance, many college students in order to get rustic look and rough impression on others will fight with everyone on little talks between them. Pictures and Media are on the main cause of surge in crime rates in different countries.
Secondly, the advancement in the unemployed list of people's also is the momentous cause for this issue. In many impoverished countries, for instance, many citizens are even incapable of making ends meet and in desperate need of necessities to survive; as a consequence, people gradually have a tendency to commit burglary or robbery to make a living. To complete one's ends meet, people choose this way for getting all such things. In India, one of the paramount factor of gigantic increase in crimes is poverty and unemployment. Due to corruption and numerous inventions of autonomous systems, employment prospects of developing countries are dwindling day by day.
To recapitulate, many causes are responsible for such extreme conditions. Government and world powers of different nations have to think about this situation and must come up with solution to get rid of crimes completely.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27419354839 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77034616935 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608870967742 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9762845792 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.2 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5333333333 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245066319396 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842032554552 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619701660644 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151012260178 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088360999612 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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