From couple of decades, criminal activities had rapidly increased and continue to do so in near future as well. Further, not only number has increased but the intensity and severity is also on rise. Many factors such as poverty, unemployment and others contribute towards this negative development and people in collaboration with government can curb the rise in criminal activities. Various responsible factors and solutions will be discussed in this essay.
Firstly, in case of the developing countries, the economy and rate of employment is not quite pleasing which could lead to myriad unemployed people and can cause unrest among weaker sections of society. With such penury, the person is left with no choice, hence pushed into the cauldron of hatred and violence. Further, with such drastic growth in population is also one of the prominent factor which lead to imbalance between number of jobs and job seekers. With each year passing, this figure is rising and has tormenting effect on the society. We have witness a tremendous increase in severity of violence. For instance, last week i have seen a video wherein three goons have beaten one retired old age police officer to death, which may be primarily due to personal vendetta. Nowadays, people lack patience and can lose temper because of silly reasons and can kill anyone mercilessly.
There are plethora of ways to curb the rising criminality, to start with, security persons should be trained and equipped with latest technologies and arms to track and tackle the criminals. Further, government should give freedom to police and military to employ the all necessary measures such as encounter to kill the criminals on the spot rather than taking them in the custody and filing a court case, which could develop sense of fear among criminals they can consider refraining themselves away from any criminal activity.
To conclude, the rising criminality can be dealt with hand of iron and the society can be made better place to live where all can live with harmony and love.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
... persons should be trained and equipped with latest technologies and arms to track and tack...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ere all can live with harmony and love.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, may, so, well, as to, for instance, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09523809524 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61110809572 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610119047619 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4403282227 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.285714286 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112388669163 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403347430066 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257417067216 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757507994428 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222508750862 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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