Nowadays children spend most for their leisure time playing computer games and the number of children engrossed in playing video games has mushroomed in last few years. There are numerous reasons for such a disastrous development primarily increase in number of computers, proliferation of internet, and engrossing nature of video games. In this essay I will discuss the reasons for this negative development.
Firstly, nowadays almost every family has a computer and children have free access to all kinds of video games and other obscene stuff on the internet. With such an easy access and least interference of parents, the kids tend to be lured by the advanced graphics and alluring nature of the video games. Once they start playing video games they get disconnected from the world and enter into their own fascinated world. For instance, recent research has shown that children of opulent families tend to incline towards video games at lower age and at higher rates as compared to children of indigent families.
Secondly, nowadays various IT companies are involved in developing video games with attractive graphics that tend to allure kids and they get engrossed in playing those to such an extent that they become prey of various cyber crimes. Such an active participation can lead to detrimental effects on the behavioral traits of children and can lead to depression. Further, most of the video games are being designed on the concept of violence that can plunge the children into cauldron of hate and violence.
To recapitulate, increased number in children spending more time playing video games have a degrading effect on the society and will result in an unhealthy and lethargic future generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...althy and lethargic future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20143884892 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6735017126 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535971223022 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9062625285 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.454545455 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261006863346 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103683413722 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093942593278 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17938879934 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549309749281 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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