In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner.
Discuss both systems.
Its an undeniable fact that marriage is one of the pivotal factor in deciding the trajectory of the one's growth and attaining mental peace in life. Perfect partner is desired by everyone and process of choosing the partner is tedious and complex one. Nowadays choosing one's own partner is very common and arranged marriages are losing their grip. In this essay I am going to discuss about advantages and disadvantages of both the aspects.
Due to increased gender equality most of the schools, colleges and universities are co-education and it is obvious to develop feelings for someone. Further, with increased audacity among the young age population the love marriage approach is now considered as safer and easier. Partners usually get time to understand each other and evaluate the compatibility between them to avoid any issues post marriage. Parents have also changed themselves over the period of time and accepted this changed approach due to the fact that they can prevent the resources employed for searching a partner and even after so much scrutiny in arranged marriage, chances of successful marriage are negligible.
On the other hand, some parents in rural areas or highly reputed people still want their children to get married as per their consent and choice. This aspect is sometimes beneficial because parents tend to enquire about family history before they make any decision and with involvement of elder people from both the sides ensure that there is no surprise before marriage. However, imposing decision on children without their consent can plunge the children into cauldron of hate and rage.
Even though, both factors have equal advantages and disadvantages but I feel that liberty to choose life partner should lie with the person itself and one should take consent of parents as well before deciding.
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... equal advantages and disadvantages but i feel that liberty to choose life partne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, as to, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17391304348 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57505971579 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3471368325 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.916666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310631587956 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100950643014 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08000037542 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159195165772 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611781032048 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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