Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?
Some people aver that education in schools is an unrivalled thing that determines the trajectory of a person and plays a pivotal role in one's success; however, I believe that apart from conventional education, myriad factors determine the success and prosperity in one's life. I will discuss some of them in detail in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, current age schools still teach the conventional methods of learning and they expect that all children should learn at same pace and depth, to achieve that, the children have to face a tough competition and they have to live upto the expectations of their parents and teachers. Such mental stress force them to study hard and may led to failure. In contrast, some children prefer more pragmatic approach of learning and with such approach they develop business acumen and social compatibility at the tender age. For instance, Einstein was a school drop out, but his Intelligence Quotient and discoveries are unmatched till date. Bill Gates and Steve Jobs both were school dropouts but let to discovery of Microsoft and Apple.
Further, some people have superb observation power, Imagination and ability to think out of the box, hence they stand out of the group and sometimes face social criticism as well. I believe, that most important thing to succeed in life is determination and sense of responsibility. Success does not come easy, with it comes a lot of responsibility, a person is successful if he/she can apply a pragmatic approach in learning and emancipate himself from conventional method of teaching.
To recapitulate, though the school education is necessary fo a person to learn basic fundamentals; however, i believe that success is more related to other benevolent knacks that lie within a person and schools must identify those attributes and help children to excel in their respective field of interests.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, so, still, well, apart from, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18032786885 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90671224611 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.9021799796 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.636363636 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182230656875 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700056500918 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795337773766 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114476656327 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667131236514 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.