Today people do less exercise. Conducting sports events such as the Olympics or World Cup encourage people to live healthily. While some people indicate that there are various other methods to remain healthy.
Discuss both views and state your opinion.
The developments in the technological front have made people sluggish and prone to many health diseases. Therefore, a section of society asserts that organising more sporting events, such as Olympics and World Cup, would propel people to opt for a healthier lifestyle, whereas others believe that there are various alternatives which can encourage people to follow a healthy life. I agree with the latter and consider that the habit of regular exercise, balanced diet along with the assistance of the government, people can live a healthy and prosperous life.
Indubitably, promoting and organising global sporting events on a large scale will have a strong influence on people's minds. When the masses will watch their role models not only participating in such competitions but also excelling in the game, they would get encouraged to look and perform like their idols. Moreover, these events will inspire and motivate people to pursue sports as a career, leading to an active lifestyle. For instance, former Indian cricket team captain, M.S. Dhoni, joined the team only when he saw Sachin Tendulkar, the world-famous cricketer, on the field.
Nevertheless, from an enlightened standpoint, many other ways can be adopted, which would assist people in maintaining their health. For one, people can be sensitised about the detrimental effects of consuming junk food, such as high cholesterol level, diabetes, cardiovascular diseases and premature death. This would encourage people to reduce the intake of unwanted calories and replace unhealthy food with healthier options. Furthermore, the government can build open-gyms in public parks and levy taxes on fatty food items. Enforcement of the fat tax by the Japanese government is an epitome of the benefits that the authorities can bring.
To conclude, hosting and promoting sporting events would have an impact on the society; however, pursuing healthy lifestyle is a personal choice but with the efforts of the authorities and the community, people can be encouraged to discard unhealthy living.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86595724628 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60625 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.07052156 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.153846154 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243526756154 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862012296734 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650064803064 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150788336058 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619043485569 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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