Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.
Metropolitan cities face a serious inconvenience to live in, in terms of qualitative aspects of life, nowadays. This essay will discuss the reasons and suggest some solutions to overcome this issue.
First and foremost, one of the major reasons that devastate the quality of living in big cities is air pollution. With the burgeoning transportation vehicles used by individuals, the environment has the detrimental carbon emission filled with poisonous gases such as carbon monoxide and carbon dioxide. This worst condition not only decreases the quality of living, but also reduces the life expectancy of people who live in urban areas. A study by The Environmental Change Institute of The University of Oxford revealed that cities like London, has badly affected by air pollution like never before, which force people to migrate to the countryside.
Moreover, there are solutions to improve the way people live by substantial implementation of sustainable energy sources in the automotive sector. This can be explained that replacing diesel, petrol and hybrid vehicles, like cars, with electric vehicles which is pollution free will dramatically control the air pollution and keep it under control. By enabling this, the life span of people will increase and therefore the better quality of life will be restored. A good illustration is that, in Finland, the government has proposed a law to replace all the existing vehicles with electric vehicles by 2025 to move to a sustainable society.
In summary, one of the main problems with poor quality of life in big cities is air pollution and this can be solved by enforcing laws to make people use electric vehicles which have no harm to the environment. It is predicted that more and more developed and developed countries in the near future will switch over to sustainable energy resources to decrease the air pollution, thus it significantly improves the quality of life in urbanized places.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'in summary', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275659824047 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.152492668622 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0909090909091 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0322580645161 0.0501214627716 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00879765395894 0.0437548338989 20% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.137829912023 0.122226691241 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0381231671554 0.0403226058552 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92008235366 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0351906158358 0.0326793684256 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.105571847507 0.0861772015684 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0205278592375 0.021408717616 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0146627565982 0.011925033212 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1950.0 1933.35771543 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 316.048096192 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23003194888 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.399361022364 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.316293929712 0.28420135186 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.242811501597 0.203846283523 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.162939297125 0.137316102897 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92008235366 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543130990415 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 56.9181387213 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0833333333 20.7743622355 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6372286721 49.517814964 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.5 127.492653851 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7743622355 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.814263465372 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 57.7127263046 49.1944974215 117% => OK
Elegance: 2.33333333333 1.69124875643 138% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4621514636 0.332605444948 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105545596004 0.102741220458 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0708099013326 0.0668466124924 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.612117178837 0.534860350844 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0914084732221 0.148594505496 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231382044994 0.134430193775 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787103701053 0.0742795772207 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.44730361646 0.324371583561 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.120296102698 0.0638462369009 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.345708700924 0.228012699653 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417634438721 0.058150111329 72% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9