Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.
On one hand urbanization in modern day cities is providing great living standards, while on the other hand, it is has been observed of late that quality of life in such cities is declining. The essay identifies socioeconomic and environmental problems as the prime suspect for the current situation, alongside describes possible solutions to overcome these challenges.
The fact cannot be denied that due to establishment and expansion of industries, a few cities offer wide range of job opportunities, thereby producing better standard of living as compared to towns and villages. No wonder these factors attract a lot of young population in search of work, which eventually leads to limited access to healthcare and education as well as unemployment. Also, over-crowded cities can be related with energy crisis resulting in frequent power cuts.
Strategic plan such as expanding the manufacturing plants to suburbs can be of help in managing challenges posed due to crowding and unequal income distribution. Besides the public transport network can be developed with the intent to have well connected routes from suburbs to metropolitan cities. For instance, Mumbai, a heavily crowded city, has local railway as it's life. The public transport effectively connects the nearby areas with the central city, thereby solving serious concerns associated with pollution and frequent traffic congestion.
Living conditions delivered by well developed cities are appealing to a vast majority of working professionals from across the country. Consequently, over-crowding and energy crisis is bound to happen, however, the problems can be fixed by connecting less developed cities or areas with fully developed cities. In addition to, improving the public transport system, a few of the production sites can be expanded to such cities as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Consequently,
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Suggestion:
...an be expanded to such cities as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54770318021 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03144791888 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618374558304 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2523601305 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.833333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0930904364801 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355684927895 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427700939443 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619649878913 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036426885895 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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