Today the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.
The fact cannot be denied that, urbanization in cities attracts people from all walks of life. On one hand, metropolis offers better living standards as compared to towns and villages, while on the other hand, it is observed that the quality of life in these cities is deteriorating. This essay describes the reasons associated with the origin of these issues and their possible solutions.
The plethora of job opportunities offered by the urban developments allures the working professionals and businessmen from across the country thereby making these cities overpopulated. This leads to the generation of socioeconomic problems such as increased housing cost and constrained access to education and healthcare facilities. In addition to this, overcrowding results in energy and resource crisis, henceforth, impacting the quality of life. Not only this, higher number of footfall, also leads to frequent traffic congestion in the city.
These bottlenecks can be managed by implementing sustainable solutions, with focus towards improving the modes of transportation and widening the scope of capital funding. Public transport network should be developed and the concept of car-pooling should be encouraged, as this will reduce the number and frequency of traffic jams. Additionally, it will lower down the incidence of asthma and other breathing related ailments. Last but not the least, these options will enable better management of natural resources and manpower in metropolitan areas.
To conclude, although, urban development boosts the living standards, however, the fact cannot be neglected that it brings forth civic issues. These obstacles can be overcome by diversification of industrial investments and strengthening the urban transportation services.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple from all walks of life. On one hand, metropolis offers better living standard...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, while, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77099236641 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15999187146 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62213740458 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5163591053 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104958344295 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365962897829 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462398481767 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644289737066 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064710871171 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.9 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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