Today you can see increasing number of vehicles on road. Why is it so? is it constructive or destructive?
Modernity is apparently wedded to comfort, luxury and convenience. Hence, an exponential rise in the number of vehicles on the road can be seen. Various factors conspicuously contribute to this phenomenon that I consider truly encouraging.
Population effects huge changes in terms of anything. The larger the number of population is, the more the number of vehicles is needed to meet the diverse purposes and utilities. Time factor directly corresponds to the quantum of the growth of both individual and society. By using private vehicles, an enormous amount of time is saved which otherwise might be lost waiting for public transportation. As luxury has become an individual’s identity and status, a private vehicle is the most common with every modern man .The ever-rising purchasing power makes it an essential one. The techies at Technopark in Trivandrum are the epitome for this because every one in three people has a private vehicle. The factors like easy availability of loan, increasing number of nuclear families and limitation of public transportation add up to the growing number of vehicles significantly.
The rising number of private vehicles undoubtedly speaks volume of the development that a society has reached. It reminds us of the life-index ticking up sending across encouraging messages of perfect growth. Time factor is synonymous to the productivity of a person. As vehicle adds to the flexibility and mobility, life becomes worthier of living. It is too hard to find how much a nation has developed without counting its vehicles. Cuba as an example is worth remembering here because it has recorded the fewest number of private cars signaling the depth of its poverty and underdevelopment.
That being said, the utility of private vehicle triggers its rising numbers. Despite the fact that this trend is a constructive one, a balanced approach between the environmental stability and individual needs should be exercised.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37540453074 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13396627938 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5533140559 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2777777778 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15297256005 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457367181979 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640895828946 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934277011388 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290645147547 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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