Tourism has been a good source of revenue in many countries. Discuss its advantages and disadvantages.
Having realized the diversified prospects nations have zealously become heavily dependent on tourism, providing attractive amenities in accordance with the demands of tourists aiming the steady progress of it. Notwithstanding the demerits it brings, every nation promotes this industry wholeheartedly considering the formidable financial resources along with scope for direct and indirect job opportunities.
Ever since the impact of globalization lifted the barriers of the movement of services and people across the world, the trend of travelling on a regular basis to the beauties of nature has become a passion for them to explore their unfulfilled desires. Spending money lavishly does not appear to be a serious concern for the travellers of developed nations, because the variation of the value of currencies, when exchanged, would enhance their financial dependency. Thus, taking into account the advantageous opportunities which lie ahead in this glittering field of activity, every government should ensure that exhaustive hospitality, beside a pristine ambience of the environment, is rest assured to the guests.
While the countries reap the harvest of this industry in various domains it unfolds, the minor damages that are created should be addressed rationally to safeguard this golden goose. The discontent of people persists that the purity of culture would be tarnished forming a mult-cultural society due to the influx of alien travellers is found to be irrelevant since brain drain and the unique influence of mass media are a reality today. Besides, spread of epidemics and waste management would never pose challenge to the environment, provided the concerned authorities devise significant preventive measures to control its dreadful impact.
Overall, many a country, obviously, does give importance for tourism, since it generates a high source of revenue besides employment opportunities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76140350877 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07864295991 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663157894737 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.3866240681 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.444444444 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083731319601 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340014531586 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054191047536 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637494406397 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646648786251 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.72 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.66 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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