Traffic congestion is a serious problem in many countries around the world. Describe the situation in your home country and suggest some solutions.
Nowadays, since cities are continuing to grow, especially in developing countries such as Vietnam and some Southeast Asia countries, their streets are becoming extremely congested. This essay will look at the reasons and propose some measures.
One of the major causes of traffic congestion is simply a lack of space. Because most of the streets are narrow, which were constructed in the last few decades, used to contain mainly bicycles, motorbikes, and a few cars, it has no room for new roads to handle the rapid growth of transport means. This problem could be addressed by investing in satellite cities which close to the central city with many modern traffic facilities and new wide roads. Simultaneously, the government should create more new jobs to engage fresh graduates moving to new cities that might be to reduce the overcrowded situations in the center.
Another factor of a traffic jam is the rising wealth of city dwellers. Purchasing a car seems to be a popular way to show off one's prosperity. Many cars in which middle-class people are affordable appear to increase gradually despite it is surely unable to widen the roads. Up to now, cars have begun to swallow the space that just used to accommodate many smaller forms of transportation. The forward way might be to stimulate new citizens turning to use public transportation instead of private cars.
In conclusion, while economic growth and population increase have led to massive matters with traffic, some practical solutions mentioned above should be taken with the view to improve the situation. It is more important to build up modern public transport systems than to destroy long time roads which may relate to historical sites and unique architectural structures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13684210526 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83067661007 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1601992954 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123051495255 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398856890841 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341206431707 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687977499202 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210879518828 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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