Traffic congestion is a serious problem in many countries around the world. Describe the situation in your home country and suggest some solutions.
As cities continue to grow, especially in developing countries, the traffic on their streets are increasingly becoming congested. While in many cases situation is so severe that traffic often brings everything to standstill. This essay will discuss the causes of traffic congestion including increasing number of vehicles on the roads and poor infrastructure. This essay will also suggests the solutions to these problems including using mass transit option and building better infrastructure.
One of the major reason for traffic congestion is increasing number of vehicles on the streets. People are using cars even for a shorter distance adding traffic issues for the commuters because of their convenience and their affordability of owning a car. For example, recent survey conducted by a reputed body revealed that the traffic issues are increasing with increasing number of cars on the streets. Another contributing factor for traffic congestion is poor road infrastructure. With the increasing number of vehicles, the existing road infrastructure is not developed enough to cope up current transit requirements. For instance, in cities like Mumbai which is constantly growing but its infrastructure is not able to cope up the demand of its transit need. In short, upward trend of number of cars on streets and poor infrastructure cause severe issues such as traffic jams.
However, there are various solutions which can help us to tackle these problems. Firstly, the government must encourage the commuters to use public transport by providing better deal to them while using these mass transit options. For example, in cities like Mumbai the central government has reduced metro fare to encourage public using metro transit option. In other words, better infrastructure and mass transit options are the best way to tackle traffic related problems. Secondly, the existing roads needs to be widen to increase the number of lanes. More and more flyovers to be constructed to give alternative route for vehicles.For example, in UAE the government has not only constructed six lane road everywhere but also constructed multi-level flyovers to overcome the traffic issues.
In conclusion, with the rapid development of cities particularly in developing countries, traffic congestion is one the major concern faced by them. This essay discussed the causes of traffic issues such as increasing number of vehicles and poor infrastructure. This essay also suggested that the solution to this problem is using mass transit options and building better infrastructure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
...ingly becoming congested. While in many cases situation is so severe that traffic oft...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'suggest'
Suggestion: suggest
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... to give alternative route for vehicles.For example, in UAE the government has not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as, in many cases, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51898734177 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02254944698 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450632911392 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0306651378 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0958923900966 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378396799447 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341055119592 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746268910203 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403950588554 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.