Youth unemployment is one of the major challenge in most countries today, and this has great impact on the growth of the nation. I completely agree that majority of school leavers are jobless in various parts of the world.
Admittedly, education is very important in order to get a decent job. Youngsters tend to leave school in early grades due to which they are not able to get job. In other words, highly educated persons are preferred by companies because they have decision making capability and required skills. These people are forced to work at low wages in factories due to lack of academic qualification, and they are not able to meet financial needs of their family. In India, for instance, there is no job market for people which are school dropouts.
On the other hand, there are various factors which contribute to the overall growth of the economy and unemployment is one of it. Factors, such as gross domestic product, national income, inflation, and unemployment jointly contribute to the economic development of a nation. Due to unemployment, this segment of the society leads to increase in poverty. Because of lack of employment government also provides various subsidies to these people, so they can fulfill their basic needs.
Furthermore, young people face various challenges and one of the major challenge is low salary scales as compared to increasing inflation. Financial growth of individuals is stagnant, whereas inflation is increasing at a high rate due to which people are left with less purchasing power. Another challenge is relocation to developed countries which have already moved to machine learning. Such countries, persuades people to settle there as it provides them better standard of living and also contributes to financial growth.
To conclude, school leavers are prone to unemployment in all the countries which affect the overall development of the nations. Various initiates can be taken by the government to promote importance of education which will eventually increase literacy level and employment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, whereas, for instance, in fact, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27963525836 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8552959173 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54103343465 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8107554723 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.176470588 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180238353552 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575469935913 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556767037603 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105746392039 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671066332694 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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