Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

education plays a cardinal role in constructing a great human being. There are many institutes, schools and colleges from anyone get educations. Here some of says that in universities there should be equality in in boys and girls in individual subjects. According to me these practices is good in the institutions and I highly in favor of this statement.

It's true that both male and female students are there in the countries and there should be balance in the number of students in the class. If in any subjects there is gender balance then it will create a sense of equality in the students that will create a positive vibes. moreover, students will try to help each other not only in studies but also in their life too. Equal amount of gender ratio in subjects show that there is no differences in the boys and girls in the institutions that is great sign of balance.

moving further, In the past, there was no sign of gender similarity, society always pushes behind the females in past. Even though they had potential, they were not allowed to school and pursue their studies in universities and schools. While we are living in the 21st-century after that still there are some societies they don't believe that girls are maint for education. looking these kind of the practices in the society gender equality in the society will be a greater step.

In conclusion, looking at upper mention situation it is crystal clear that boys and girls should be equal to the universities are a great initiative for society

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...in the number of students in the class. If in any subjects there is gender balance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, while, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82509505703 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61316610766 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513307984791 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2214059535 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.6153846154 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178938569005 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602156411732 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681728697499 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104562555423 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624262116314 0.056905535591 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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