Some people think that art is the essential subject for the children at the school. while other think it is waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
In modern world skills like art is essential for pupils in their overall development. According to some people, art should be compulsory at the school subjects while others criticize this and declared a time-wasting activity. I am going to explain both views in details and then I will conclude.
As I mentioned earlier that art is important for children's growth, which brings umpteen of advantages. first of all, It develops skills in the kids. They learn many arts in school such as painting, crafting, drawing and so on. As a result, these additional activities open up future doors of opportunities in terms of job, particular profession. However, In the past parents were not aware and they never allowed their kids into these activities, today's generation is more aware and
motivates their children to enroll in such classes regularly. Secondly, kids find hidden talents from art and they are building their carrier in art. Nowadays, not only the government promotes art, but it also providing the platform to individuals to build the future. As a result, they organize competitions in every city.
In contrast, some narrow-minded still think that it is a waste of time and they do not allow their kids to enroll in art classes. parents are so fearful about taking any risk. These risks can be afraid of losing focus from their studies and can end up with losing future job carrier. If students focus more on art classes then they do not show their interest in the main subjects and they can take back seats in studies. next, In this busy pace of life earning money is the uphill task for the parents. If they permission for classes, their financial system can be disturbed and have to struggle financially. As such, it can also affect their children's studies too.
In conclusion, In the new era, Extra activities like art is part and partial of life. I am strongly in favour of art and the government should also promote this on a big level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85416666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62736099416 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574404761905 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6038249367 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.55 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199311220665 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563055418281 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695798026608 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113530909017 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849210960354 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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