Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
These days, people in our society have encouraged women to participate in each and every sector. Undoubtedly, it is a superb idea to empower women. However, I do not accord with the notion to reserve equal seats for male and female students, and I will stand my reasons in further paragraphs.
Earlier, society was male dominated as a result women were deprived from most of the basic facilities such as primary schooling, which eventually stopped them to progress in every fields. However, with time, society has matured and understand the contribution of women, and people have started giving opportunities to females, as a result standard of the society has improved. For instance, females are leading many organisation as CEOs and MDs, pursuing professional courses like medical, engineering. By motivating female to stand side-by-side in every field helps the nation, in broad sense, to grow their economy, because potential of workforce of the nation has increased by 50% if it allows females to get education.
However, 50% reservation for females in schools or university is not all an encouraging idea. What if, because of this reservation, a deserving male student may miss his opportunity to get admission in the university. It will be sheer injustice to this person. I believe, seats in educational institute should be given on merit basis. If all the female candidates have the capability to secure the all seats of university on merit basis, they should get enrolled. Reservation, in any form, is a termite for the society, so it should be banned in each sector, not just in education.
To sum up, although women empowerment is a need for the society, it does not necessary to give reservation to females in education institutions. Instead, society should motivate and encourage girls to participate in every event, that are done by men. Mentally male and females are equal, it is just a matter of opportunity and proper guidance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun organisation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many organisations'.
Suggestion: many organisations
...oved. For instance, females are leading many organisation as CEOs and MDs, pursuing professional ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10625 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95195247887 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565625 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.221386839 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168295558078 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530553605512 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333629276858 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105581111206 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161011328014 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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