Write a letter to colleague who gave you a book that helped you for a presentation at work.
You should:
1.Describe the presentation
2.Why was it important
3.How did it help you
Dear Shalini,
I am writing this letter to thank you for lending me your book for my presentation. This book helped me in many ways and I am glad to inform you that the presentation went well. Everybody liked the presentation and I was highly appreciated for my work. Moreover, the presentation was extremely comprehensive and covered all aspects of the topic.
Furthermore, your book “The solar energy” turned out to be crucial for my presentation. As the presentation was on solar energy, the results of various studies mentioned in the book were used in the presentation. Also, I got in-depth knowledge of solar energy with the help of this book. Interestingly, this book helped me with not only the content for the presentation but also the organization of ideas.
In addition to this, I had adopted technical vocabulary from the book to make the presentation look more professional. Indeed this book was a great support.
Thank you once again for the help.
Yours faithfully,
Name
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| Wed, 07/10/2019 - 08:57 | Rajie | 84 | view |
| Fri, 07/05/2019 - 05:54 | BIBHU KALITA | 78 | view |
| Fri, 07/05/2019 - 05:50 | BIBHU KALITA | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...he presentation look more professional. Indeed this book was a great support. Thank...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, moreover, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11445783133 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14589941321 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584337349398 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6099635422 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.75 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300512688688 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118547737249 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906190966428 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210901259312 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108840299063 0.0580467560999 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.