Universities should be concerned with educating people so that they have wide general knowledge and be able to, consider important matters from an informed viewpoint, and not simply prepare students for jobs required by society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
This is fact that in these days graduates must be aware of the issues prevailing in community. Many argue that it is fundamental duty of colleges to pass on more and more general knowledge to make them able to handle broader issues, others argue that they must not be worried about big issues and should do those things that are acceptable by society. According to my point of view, adults should contribute in solving comprehensive problems.
On the one hand, there are some reasons of why people think that individuals should take care of normal obligations in society. Firstly, in order to make society a batter place to live everyone must contribute in its well-being as the conditions can be improved with collective endeavours of all members of the community. For example- educational institutions must try to infuse things such as respecting senior citizens and take steps to boost the well being of society. Secondly, youngsters has a sedentary lifestyle nowadays as they are under the influence of technical advancements. Therefore, illiterate citizens can create awareness about maintaining fitness by doing physical activities instead of indoor activities.
On the other hand, in my opinion university graduates should try to dealt with huge issues that are prevailing in community at present. First of all, crime rate is increasing day by day because of many potential reasons that has a negative impact on toddlers as they are motivated to indulge in crimes in an exchange for money. Hence, they should help in reducing offences in society, drug addiction is another serious issues. So for sorting out serious problem. As a consequent, it will provide guidance to young generations in the society.
To conclude, Although i believe that learners should assist in leading normal norms, if they will handle more wider issues they would become responsible and helpful for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18566775244 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80437298629 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602605863192 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9712355209 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197441391299 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593012577858 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341226964124 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112524462636 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243582815088 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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