University students must pay all tuition fees, because it benefits mostly them individually, rather than the society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
College students are responsible for paying the tuition fees rather than the society as they reap the benefits solely. This essay disagrees with the aforementioned statement completely. This essay will first discuss at how it is financially not possible for students to pay expensive tuition fees and then discuss that the society is also liable as they also enjoy the advantages of qualified students in future.
The tuition fees of universities in may developed countries are highly priced which students cannot afford. It is undoubtedly acceptable that students and their parents belonging to a developing or poor county do not have lump sum amount of money available for paying tuition fees. Thus it is the responsibility of community and government to provide financial aid to students in terms of providing educational loans or scholarships so that they are able to fulfil their dreams and aspirations and acquire more skills and knowledge.
Moreover, students getting passed out from universities do not work for their own selfish interests. Instead of that they work in big organisations and some even open their own business and thus share their experience and edition with other people. This in turn helps the country to grow and be socially, economically and financially strong. Students with the help of their knowledge will solve many problems faced by countries such as income disparity, illiteracy, inflation and financial instability and thus will help in the overall development of nation.
To conclude, In my opinion government and community should take up the responsibility of paying the tuition fess because they are not only too expensive but country will also enjoy the merits of the high knowledge of students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...oney available for paying tuition fees. Thus it is the responsibility of community a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29602888087 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90667752898 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559566787004 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6299272585 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.363636364 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196332853777 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812009426594 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753414770002 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117534625921 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062933680217 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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