In this contemporary world of modernization, it is impossible to imagine a life without computers. Although, using a computer on daily basis has positive impacts on children, there are negative ones as well. This essay will argue why computers play an essential role in order to run our life smoothly despite of its negative consequences.
Although, machines have made our lives easier, certain people believe that the regular use electronic gadgets like PCs, mobile phones, tablets, et cetera, have more negative effects than positive as they are act as a hindrance in overall growth of children. Unlike past, children nowadays are more likely to spend most of their free time by sticking to the screen of computers and performs less physical activities due to which they get more prone to the diseases like obesity, digestion-related problems, weak eyesight and many more. For instance, the children in the past were found to be more healthy and active as compared to those of today because there were no recreation sources other than games like football, volleyball, et cetera, available that time. As a result, they were slim because of their full body movement. Thus, computers have caused serious implications among children.
However, I believe that the advantages of using a PC outweigh its disadvantages since there is nothing unavailable on the internet, whether it is linked to education or entertainment. Nowadays, the syllabus in schools is getting difficult day by day due to which parents find it hard to help their wards complete it as there is a huge difference between the education system of these two generations. As a result, they feel helpless and try to find the answers to the questions through internet. For example, a survey was conducted among parents by World Education System in which they were asked how they manage to make their children learn and unfortunately, all of them replied with the same answer, that is, by searching on internet. That is why; computers play a pivotal role in everyone's life.
In conclusion, this essay argued why there is a need of computer despite of its negative impacts on little-aged. In my opinion, children must not be restricted for using a computer but they should be supposed to use it only under parent's supervision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05291005291 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85518255306 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8097673545 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204984258075 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694272690973 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681164177772 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123027399446 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602847151394 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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