Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree.

Vaccinating children has become increasingly unpopular among certain demographics of the society. These people claim that vaccinations are hazardous to children's health and as such are not needed. This essay will argue that why vaccinating against spreadable disease is entirely necessary despite some potential risks.

Parents have always been way of vaccinating their children. They are justifiably worried about injecting their children with unfamiliar substances that could potentially make them sick. Parents naturally feel protective for their children. Indeed, there have been some recorded instances of children unfortunately reacting adversely to their injections.These few instances have bolstered existing fears in parents that vaccinations are not necessary and potentially more dangerous than the possibility of contracting the communicable disease itself.

Despite the minor risks associated with vaccinating children, the idea that they are unnecessary and dangerous is completely preposterous. Vaccines have prevented vast number of deaths over hundreds of years in countries around the world. The number of death so for prevented far outweighs the number of children who have been adversely affected by the immunizations themselves. Some diseases have actually been completely eradicated through vaccination campaigns. Overall, the idea that vaccination are unnecessary and hazardous is ill-informed and dangerous in itself and could potentially lead to a far worse outcome for society.

Average: 8.5 (3 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12264150943 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14017763146 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599056603774 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.11036491 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196814808733 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825352327209 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024213344675 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142551275647 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031024140975 0.056905535591 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.92 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Vaccinating children has become increasingly uncommon among certain demographics of society. These people claim that vaccinations are hazardous to children's health and therefore they must be avoided. However, in my opinion, I completely disagree that vaccinations are harmful and I believe that they are absolutely necessary to eradicate diseases from the root.

Some parents are worried about using vaccinations for their ward's health. They feel that these doses could kill the natural immunity. They also think that the chemical substance present in these medicines could be unsafe for the kids and might cause adverse effects. It has been observed that some children have unexpected symptoms such as weakness soon after the vaccinations. Additionally, some scams have also happened in the past, citing financial irregularities in the procurement process of these medicines. Above reasons explain, why parents are not so confident about the success of vaccination program.

However, there are far more benefits of immunisation than risks. Firstly, the vaccinations eliminate the spreadable diseases from the root itself. Secondly, they boost the immunity system of a child. And finally, they save young toddlers from various kinds of infections. Studies have shown how vaccinations have minimised deaths caused by chronic diseases such as Typhoid, Measles, Pneumonia etc. In some countries, a critical disease Polio is completely eradicated because of a prolonged immunisation initiative supported by the government of these nations. These instances suggest that early life vaccinations prove to be more advantageous despite the associated risks. Therefore, vaccinations are an absolute imperative.

Overall, it can be concluded that timely vaccinations have several positive impacts on children's health even if there are some minor side effects, which can be ignored easily.