Violence in the media promote violence in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Broadcast communications such as traditional media and contemporary technologies have a great influence on the society in a negative way. I completely agree with this statement that communication assets became the most violent issue of the society. I will substantiate the relevant examples in the upcoming paragraphs.
To initiate with, there are noted reasons of spreading the violence through the exposure of telecom media. Firstly, Youngsters spend most of the time on watching television. They are very inquisitive about the actions of thriller, murder and brutal videos and get easily manipulated from them. For an instance, a latest news updated last year, a sixth class boy murdered his fellow because the later did not give his own seat. Secondly, with the advancements of technologies media became the most powerful platform in order to get information. This communication process usually hurt the individual’s religions and traditional culture. Two years before someone has disrespect the holy book of Sikhism community and post on the social media. As a result, the Sikh community lost their tolerance power due to mislead or misbehaviour their religion.
Thirdly, it is irrefutable fact that interchanging messages such as Facebook and WhatsApp are easily platforms / applications to convey the messages with each and every one. This is the main reason terrorism can increase the fear in the people minds. Last but not least in the recent years, Brutality and communal riots has rapidly increased among the people. For an example, a new study reviewed about the sixty percent violence has been created due to impact of social media.
To conclude, media is solely reason to spread all malfunctioned criticisms and programs over the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...manipulated from them. For an instance, a latest news updated last year, a sixth ...
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Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...pplications to convey the messages with each and every one. This is the main reason terrorism can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3731884058 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96553203006 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659420289855 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6146320489 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.6875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116022779684 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332332388863 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471814647863 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645469467436 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132449616153 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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