In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
What are your opinions on this issue?
Children are indulging themselves in salaried jobs in different nations nowadays. Whereas a certain section of society perceives that it is not reliable for off-spring but others argue that youngsters can learn valuable lessons and get experienced during the job.
I agree with the former statement but with under circumstances of age should be manipulated. I will substantiate my opinion with relevant reasons/examples in the subsequent paragraphs.
To initiate, there are various reasons why it has been disadvantageous for them. Firstly, they cannot put concentration on formal education which is very important to them. According to a recent survey, Eighty per cent of students had not to pay average attention to academic studies due to the employment of any workplace and sometimes lured by money. Secondly, they can face exploitation issue and not fair mature to stand up against with the child abuses.
Thirdly, childhood is the tender age where they can enjoy their life with playful activities and built the physical structure which leads to a healthier life. Whereas adolescents are unable to consume high nutrient foods because of the pressure of work. This is the main reason young individuals are not well being by mentally and physically. However, I believe that seeking for salaried jobs by juveniles makes them financially independent and gain experience for the shadow of livelihood. For instance, if the young one who wants to become a chef there is no need for academic certificate and can follow the passion wholeheartedly without any circumstances of any age.
To conclude, it is clearly evident that children should follow the essential ways in the appropriate age because working at a younger age can deter rioted their future and cannot resort at any scenarios.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29020979021 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00308943243 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643356643357 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6636611626 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110330829435 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347021926271 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024408532815 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540824310782 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272193603188 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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