In the last few decades, there has been more and more case of famous people being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in the media have no right to privacy.
To what extent do you agree?
Over a period of time, public figures are getting harass by paparazzi and humiliated increasing rapidly. A certain section of society believes that the well-known have no personal life in front of the media. I agree with the former statements and not in favour of the latter statement. I will substantiate the opinion and provide the relevant examples or reasons in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons and examples that the celebrities and veteran people are easily get manipulated and negativity influenced by traditional and electronic media. Firstly, well-known personalities are first of all are human-being because they are also in relationships such as family, friends and relatives etc. Our Role-Models should live their own life without any hesitation and free of false rumours. For example, media publications tend to more attention to their personal life such as getting married, about pregnancy and other personal relationships.
Thirdly, Celebrities have an individual right to spend life with loved ones. Because sometimes they got exhausted from camera life and want to stay away from monotony life as a simple man. But press publications are following their footprints about their travelling, roaming and even eating. However, we cannot deny the advantages of media because media is the only medium of interchanging views about the popularity of celebrities all over the world.
To conclude, considering the above-mentioned points, all individual celebrities should have a proper way to maintain own private life and media have no responsibility to highlight their conducive life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
Over a period of time, public figures are getting harass by p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5219123506 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05629887967 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609561752988 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8171254831 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107975642748 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356832505298 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309801226161 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645354710737 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013155557198 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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