Shopping Habits of people mainly depend on the age group they belong to To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Shopping Habits of people mainly depend on the age group they belong to.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People of every age group are fond of buying things like clothes, household materials or any property. The modern generation has an extraordinary bucket list of things to buy due to showing a materialistic personality whereas elderly individuals are less interest to buy of things. I accord with this notion that is from young ones to grey people, which leads to their shopping habits. A lot of aspects does matter for individual ones.

To begin with, young ones have a special curiosity for buying the toys, different small gadgets and certain games. Adolescents have different choices to purchase such as virtual games, sports games and certainly essential for outdoor and indoor activities. Moving further, adults’ individuals are very keen to get things in terms of clothing, fine-tunes gadgets and certain products. Middle-age people often pay more attention to household things.

On the other hand, gender also plays an important role in shopping, so they do not have a similar attitude. Men are more interested in obtaining drugs such as alcohol while women are fond of home decor, crafts and ethnic and western costumes. If we talk about old people, they also have diverse personalities about shopping. In other words, we can say that they can make contact in traditional or religious things and use their spending on spiritual saints. Due to special visual effects, the influence of advertisement on a person's life has a huge impact.

In Conclusion, Maintaining the data of consumers is the source to get information about the habits of shopping of every age of people, Apart from the data source, there could be more factors which leads to spending habits.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12408759124 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72828710649 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624087591241 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6989939183 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.285714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104484710585 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338939768278 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408283410587 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.060730210739 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186173438077 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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